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the animation is good, but the anatomy is messed up. Heres another edit since you didnt seem to like cures
desmond.imageshack.us/Himg263/scaled.php
heres some of your problems:
hips are too low, boobs too high (you have them growing out of her clavicle), crotch too wide, head a little too small, no hands and feet looks a little wierd here.
I dont think the dark blue is neccesary in the skin either, its too high contrast
Nice edit on the face, but otherwice I did not want to make a dwarf out of her. My version might be missing some neck.
Oh my Cure, that is quite the awesome link.
But yes, like I said on DeviantArt, I don't think the explosion is dramatic enough, I think you should make it POP more, and surprise the viewer...
Boom animation is so nice)