I like the piece, but it has a couple of small flaws in my opinion.
For instance: the front of the bunny needs a more rounded pixel-shape, instead of the lines coming to a point like they do now. This can be done by altering the slope of the lines and the ammount of pixels per decrease. c:
As for the speechbubble: it seems a little too cramped at the moment. Give the first and last letter some more distance from the edges of the speech-bubble, it'll look less squished that way. also: try to avoid decreasing lines of 1 pixel each, it tends to give a very sharp, diagonal edge (as is also present at the front of thebunny).
All in all, a cute piece. But it needs some tweaking. :)
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I like the piece, but it has a couple of small flaws in my opinion.
For instance: the front of the bunny needs a more rounded pixel-shape, instead of the lines coming to a point like they do now. This can be done by altering the slope of the lines and the ammount of pixels per decrease. c:
As for the speechbubble: it seems a little too cramped at the moment. Give the first and last letter some more distance from the edges of the speech-bubble, it'll look less squished that way. also: try to avoid decreasing lines of 1 pixel each, it tends to give a very sharp, diagonal edge (as is also present at the front of thebunny).
All in all, a cute piece. But it needs some tweaking. :)