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Really neat style! If you're still going to work on this, I'd suggest outlining the characters or something so I can see them more clearly. Otherwise it's nice.
It is kind of hard to read, but I think it is acceptable. If I had more time to work on it, definately I would play with it alot more, but oh well, Im happy I finished it.,because this time, time wasnt on my side.
Very cool and original style. I do think you could improve readability though.
This is really good. Needs more contrast though.