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the black on the inside stand out too much... the contrast i squite low, id suggest very strong contrast to make it seem like night it doesnt really have spooky atmosphere or anything and doesnt read 'halloween' to me.. it looks very clean and not really spooky... its an abandoned house, so there probably ivy and all sort of plant all over it... by adding some vegetation u could also improve the animation, for example have some grass/leaves movinbg in the wind aswell... speaking of storm, some flashes might be nice,,, also u could add some clichee red glowiong eyes peeking out of the windows from time to time or something, to make it more intresting ...
heres a quick try out :)
http://i992.photobucket.com/albums/af45/oooonek/halloween_house2.gif
The only thing, is the perspective of the deck is a bit wrong, but i like it.
The lines are bit jaggy at right and left sides that's what I see. Otherwise, good!
@Onek whoa that is amazing! Thank you very much! great advice thanks! :D I'll work on it