OK!! Updated! :) what about it now? thanks for the advices and the comments, and of course Ikiru, inspired by kirby's first boss ^^
Kirby...? Wonderful mockup. I feel like the branches are kind of separate from the foliage, other than that it's great. I'd play it.
Hmm an evil tree that attacks with a noose and displays his victims like trophies. Therefore draw some victims hanging from his branches.
you are right :) i have to correct the jagging, and the missing pixel, this hero is supposed to be an squire, and the projectile is his only weapon, a small shield :) btw thanks for the comments !
Yeah, I like the tree and everything, too. zch is right about the missing pixel. The only other thing I'm not sure about is the projectile flying towards the tree. What is it supposed to be - a frisbee?
Thats one really good looking 4 color mockup! Some parts are perhaps a bit jaggy, and there is a pixel missing in the shadow of the dark heart. Other than that it's awesome.
Nicely done. The character reminds me of tintin maybe because of the hair. I love it :)