holy **** this is creepy. The black outlines and lack of contrast in the shading need to be fixed firstly.
You have some really ugly jaggies in the black outline-
-see around the feet, hand and elbow, and the dark brown on those bag things the guy is perched on top of, etc.
Lastly, 54 colors is way too much. You have so many colors that are indistinguishable that need to go. hivemind.in/pj/specs/index.php
I am pretty sure this won't be accepted in its current state, but I encourage you to take this piece to the WIP section in the forums. Other members will help you improve this piece so it will be acceptable for the PJ gallery
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holy **** this is creepy. The black outlines and lack of contrast in the shading need to be fixed firstly.
You have some really ugly jaggies in the black outline-
-see around the feet, hand and elbow, and the dark brown on those bag things the guy is perched on top of, etc.
Lastly, 54 colors is way too much. You have so many colors that are indistinguishable that need to go. hivemind.in/pj/specs/index.php
I am pretty sure this won't be accepted in its current state, but I encourage you to take this piece to the WIP section in the forums. Other members will help you improve this piece so it will be acceptable for the PJ gallery