what a great edit, dude ;) Thanks so! next time i'll know how to make a good pallete.
I found your colors garish. Maybe try something like this? i1034.photobucket.com/albums/a426/Zach_Masta/heart.png
two of those colors are really similar, I would add more contrast if i were you.
sure thing. It's good obviously to plan your colors beforehand, but always after you finish a piece, take a step and ask yourself, are you happy with the colors, the lines, the shading, etc. If not, then go back and tweak!