It made it through, but my grip was that it doesn't take full advantage of the pixel medium which would bring up the question - Why pixel art?. I suppose it's more pixel art than it is oekaki though. Perhaps it was the zoom and the lack of texture and shading that made me feel that way...
While this is good, my only problem is it technically isn't pixel art. :/
Your style is really cool, but you need to work on the AA, as said.
I agree with Delicious. In my opinion it's borderline pixel art (there's just barely enough detailing to keep it from being oekaki). That blurry line between mediums... *shrug*