Anatomically it is pretty good.
Bit too bright get some darker colours in there to emphasise details.
It's a nice piece (yes could use some more contrast) and the preview is cool.
If you feel your piece needs the background, leave it in there! It's your art, keep it as you like it!
Having said that, listening to advice is always good to help improve so I'd suggest heeding the 'needs more contrast' advice I, and others, have given.
The background IS just a single color so it's, most probably, not really needed :)
He means make the background transparent. This piece is actually quite good, and it is really easy to give it more contrast. Do those, and this'll be added through to the gallery without a problem. Also, the preview piecture is really awesome.
Ive noticed in the last year or 2 that this seems to be my major problem and my color selection. For some reason i keep strying towards colors that look faided.
needs much more contrast to be readable, it's very washed-out right now
What do you mean the background. theres no background there?
Looks good :) Some advices:
- Remove that unnecesary background.
- Make the innerlines darker
- Make the outline lighter
Belt ccould come down a little too so it doesn't connect oddly with the arm bands