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k, so you've got your up and down motion, good job. but it's too linear. there needs to be a delay before the bob. this is hard to explain (and hard to imagine). but bear with me.
I think the bob up needs to occur at about midway of the wings going down. as for the wings going up, i don't know how it would normalise.
instead of resubmitting works to the gallery, perhaps you should make a WIP thread in the forums until the piece is finished. This gives people flexibility of their critiques and you won't have to keep deactivating works. Plus people might be more obligated to help with things they see wrong with it. perhaps even make edits. you also get the benefit of being able to compare older tweaks with newer tweaks which can help the development of a piece too.
anyways, still looks like a parrot.. I think I preferred the old colours too.. dunno. forgot what the old one looks like.
tail looks really strange. Maybe try a more realistic, wave-like motion?
Well technically I intended for this thing to look around 10% bird. It's just something I think a traditional dragon should have.