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Yeah, it was either post it like this or not post it at all, and it's been so long since I posted something that I wanted to. I've got some half-completed big pieces I've been sitting on for a while, and it's kinda frustrating to not be able to post them, which I guess is why I uploaded this. I know it has a lot of problems but don't want to work on it anymore.
And yes, it's the same sky.
Do I recognise that sky from a previous piece, or is it simply the same style you've implemented? Either way, it's the best part. Clearly you have a knack for smooth, faint clouds. The windows and leaves are also good.
The piece, as a whole, suffers from being incomplete. You've mentioned that it's incomplete and it really shows. It's a shame as it only hurts the good stuff you have on show. I think you should carry on with this and fill up the room for a future resubmission. You should start a progress topic on the forums if you haven't already.
Some points: The table and chairs are inconsistent. The far chair has more shadow than the near chair and the desk barely has any at all. Considering how severe the shadows are being cast from the window frames, the desk should certainly have more.
Add more stuff to the room, Periwinkle!
This is awesome, love the windows and the light coming through
The desk is actually a touchscreen display, so those are virtual documents.
Thanks for the compliments, everyone!
Looks nice man! but it was added today and it is already in the main page I am waiting for my pixel art for 5 days lol
Truely awesome!!! 5 out of 5 goes to this piece from my side because of great scene!
My only critique is that the obvious business that it's sparse and could use more stuff in the scene. What's done already is great.
Judging from my own experiences, I suggest that you come back to this when the muse strikes you; it might be months, but it's well worth finishing IMO.