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Swear I did not mean to, I have an unreliable internet connection and it gave me the error page the first two go rounds. I'll remove them, thanks for telling me.
I was about to ask the same thing. Why the triple submission?
One submittion of the same piece usually does the trick, why do you have three?
Alright, here's my thoughts.
I dislike the orange/redness of the skin. It doesn't look good - try a color that's browner.
The legs look weird. The thighs and upper legs need more thickness.
Your animation needs at least one or two more frames, or the delay between the frame switches needs to be changed. (As it is, it looks like he's flicking his arms up towards his chest every time he takes a step. Also, the legs look like it's under severe strain from gravity, and they snap to the ground after the cycle completes. It looks unnatural.)
Another thing, it looks like the person is moonwalking. Try moving the entire icon one pixel down or up between frame switches.
Other than that, it's a great attempt. Kudos ;)