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This looks pretty neat and since I see a lot of potential in this piece I'm gonna give it some tough love: The outline on the left hip needs some attention, the hips could be a little rounder/fuller. The internals on the body has a nice & clean style that clashes with the busy hair and hands...don't bother with details in the hair, just work with the outline and a few shades, make the areas around the face and neck darker/black to convey depth and frame the face. The shoulder are too narrow. The hand are too small and jittery...what's up with the left thumb? The lower arms are too thin in relation to the upper arms...esp. considering they are covered with stuff. The lower front leg is too short in relation to the thigh and shorter than the back leg. Not sure what the checkered pattern inside the thighs and arms are...shadow or costume-fabric? Since her skin is blue it could look good if you gave the suit a complementary red tint.
I like the hips and the idea of the character.
This piece as potencial, but you need to work on it though.
The size of the hands could be increased and... The Face. Eyes are ok, but nose and mouth are looking weird. Nose: Looks somewhat angular and flat. Mouth: Is it open or what? Also asymmetrical and no lower lip readable.
Also agree with DawnBringer's points.