beautifull work 

Thanks for the help jok. I made the water less bent(don't worry your english is fine). I'm not going to change anything else though, i've been working on this for so long and I want to make new things now. I really like your edit though, if I ever make something like this again i'll remember the changes you made.

Thanks clefairykid Flonkon and xxmantisxx (:

xxmantisxx: thx - edited

 I really like the colors here, nice work.

Jok: I'm pretty sure pixel joint uses BBCode, though there's still a "link" button in the comment box.

 Glad you finished it... looks great so far....

 Saw this in the WIP forum, it's come a long way great work so far, keep working hard! : ) I especially think the change in composition and colours has helped the most.

3m edit

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/5707/97881232.png
 

grr, i'm not sure how to make links working

i must say that light (color) on the person is really good and looks realistic

rest is rather flat and empty, you could work on the sea more (looks "generic")

line of water on the beach shouldn't be so bended(? - sorry but my engilsh is weak), it gives impresion of presepctive short that is uncompatiblie with flat horizon

but colors in this are inspiring, and there is something in this

sorry for long comment ;)

Thanks for the help cure. I hope it's fixed now.

 Notice how in Jeremy's editit he light Is more scattered and dispersed, whereas your is more focused like a laser. And make sure that the pixel clusters you're creating aren't arbitrary, and conform to the shape of the waves and texture of the water. The longer clusters Jeremy used better illustrate the angle we're viewing the ocean from, the random undulations you're creating are looking a bit like fire.

Is this better?

 The highlight in the ocean should be scattered by the waves, rather than in a solid zigzag