I love this film. Well... I love sidecars too...
It looks great, but for me the flap of Jones's jacket (the one away from the 'camera') seems a little off for me, and the glasses on Senior look more like suprised eyes.
Very nice iso work on the motorcicle.
However, I must say that I find the color usage rather boring, and the poses, expect the one from Jones Senior, do look really stiff and unnatural. I love the folded hands of Senior, as well as the fact that you included the umbrella. Very nice detail! (you might want to think about loosing the glasses, they stick out too much in that level of detail, even though they are not really an essential part of the character, such as his beard)
Thank you all.
The pix is mightier than the sword !