MikauKahn >

It's not garlic powder but spicy oil. ;)

About the picture on the newspaper. Your advice and fix match exatly with the debrief we ad with my collègue. You've pointed something.

Actualy i tried diferent things for this ellement first i wanted to transform a real picture from google. With an iso and law def deformation, but of course it didn't match with the pix style. producing a picture pix by pix would take to mush energy for the time i had... So i took a sample from an other illus and incorpated it brutally in the news paper. I wasn't very happy the result but...

Thanks for your interest i realy apreciate this kind of critics because it a efficient way to improve my skill.

Sanfrouah >

C'était precisement l'idée. je suis donc très content que ça fonctione. Bien à toi et à bientôt dans le coin.

Thanks both of you.

 I fear you may have done too much detail into the newspaper picture D:

It looks like an actual scene, and the mouse is floating over it.

My idea for a fix: Tone down the colors for it (lower the saturation).

Also, I can't tell what that green thing in the pizza box is. I want to say it's garlic powder.

Other then that, beautiful attention to detail!

J'aime bien le détail des auréoles de café, ça sent le mec qui a buché toute la nuit.

Rayovatron : magazine illustration.
Thanks Yrizoud for the sharing technics critics (love this). I'm not familiar with the cast shadow concept.

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I think you do a good iso-ing of objects, but you could work much more on cast shadows in order to put them in the right space. Specifically: the pencil is cylindrical so the underside is guaranteed to cast a shadow.