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nice use of colors, cool art, but perspective problems killed this otherwise fantastic piece. i still like it though.
i have a big problem with distance and depth with this piece. your colors are fabulous, your rendering is pretty decent, but the scenery as a whole is breaking some very fundamental rules on distance and scale and perspective.
the mountain sizes you have illustrated are what mountain tops might look like from about 50-100 miles away in terms of scale. yet they look like their just a couple hundred yards away from your bridge which is quite apparent to be rather close to the camera.
i feel like youre picking up certain things in the rendering department very well. but its sort of meaningless if one doesnt have a strong grasp of all the fundamentals. I should know a lot about this i used to suffer from this quite heavily
This could do with some refinement: you've got AAd jagged lines, sketchy pixel clusters... not to mention the perspective makes no sense at all, and nor do the mountains nor the sky. Seriously, work on something smaller which you can refine more easily, and use references.
Cara, gostei pra caramba mas a mistura de neve e terra(ou gelo) muda tão repentinamente. .-.
Your texturing of the mountains and that ice(?) bridge leading off into the horizon is really throwing the piece off.
Adoro esse estilo meio pouco refinado mas sem linhas tortas.
Your mountains look to be about three stories tall, but otherwise good piece :)