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I made a quick edit mainly I think you could use more contrast, but there are anatomical issues I didnt adress in the edit. I didnt really spend time on the hair.
Your facial anatomy isn't bad, (thers a spot on the right cheek that blends with the hair and it read a bit weird) but your color choices are poor. She needs more red in her face to maker her more alive, and less yellow. I made a color edit for you that you could look at
http://i520.photobucket.com/albums/w328/adcrusher/portraitedit.png?t=1337015618
(the hair wasn't supposed to change colors excuse that part of it)
good luck!
thanks for the suggestions, got a few other things im workin on at the moment but i see what you mean.
I recommend taking out those lines in the hair because it makes the hair look like a messy mop. Some AA on the eyebrows would be good too. I think her lips could use some work. Try a darker color for the upper lip.
I agree with r1k