Could afford to make her lips much bigger haha.

You still missed a white dot near the hair on the top left.

 i like it :D... the only thing is the low contrast in few colors. specially the face, but i really like it :D

 I know, she looked weird when i tried to make the jaw and chin wider :( 

Also, I eliminated the white dots, thank you

you kinda reversed the face. chin and jaw should be wider. 

Nice one, looks like a comic scene.

The chin seems to have some white dots. Need to be careful with the pixeling.

pretty