More bases !

More bases !

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Title: More bases !
Pixel Artist: Erowel  (Level 3 Hatchet Man :: 3516 points)
Posted: 7/16/2012 05:06
Palette: 7 colors
Statistics:  3 comments    1 faves    0 avatars

I really need advices for this girl, especially on the arms.

I know the palette isn't really good, I'm gonna change it later

Edit : Updated. Here's the first version : http://nsa29.casimages.com/img/2012/07/17/120717121238667714.png

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hannahjap (Level 2 Dealer) @ 7/21/2012 06:45

I'd lower the crotch a little. The legs looks pretty good in shape. The arms seem to rigid, I think, that looks like the problem to me. Look at some photos of people standing in a relaxed position, and maybe go from there? They are also probably -slightly- too short.


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Erowel (Level 3 Hatchet Man) @ 7/17/2012 02:08

Thank you for your comment !

I used a ref from posemaniacs but I didn't find a standing person like this, so the proportions may be off, yes^^'.

I'll change what you said, but my biggest problem is the position of the arms, I can't get it right.

 

EDIT : Updated. Don't know if it's better. More critics please .


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Ashkin (Level 8 Rear Admiral) @ 7/17/2012 01:04

I like the general torso area, but the head seems like that of a baby- way out of proportion when compared with the rest of the body. Try making it smaller. The upper legs look fine as well.

The arms are too thin when compared to the legs- thicken them, and maybe add a lighter shade to the lower part to make them seem level with the pelvis in depth. Also, a little work on the feet could help- they need some anti-aliasing on the inner areas, which you could do easily wtih a few pixels of a darker color. The lower legs could use some thickening as well- they look like they might snap.


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