Great attention to shading, Just the legs are a bit odd.

 I really like colours used for the skin, but the legs might be a bit apart for my liking maybe.

 Hey all, thanks for the comments! I will definitely look at the legs! 

 This is very cute! :) And yes thanks for the critique!

 Thanks for the critique! I will look at it soon! :)

 Heres a Dress i came up with in about 10mis, im not very good so its not great but thought i would try :P

i.imgur.com/miTMh.png

Anyways i agree the leggs need to be more inward and the feet are akwardly placed.

But Never the Less i really Like it!

-Mat

I agree with Danori, also the feet seem to be turned in too much, would much prefer these with the legs/feet tweaked a bit, otherwise these are very nice

 The thighs are spread apart quite a bit. They should be closer. Only critique :)

I like it. A lot.