That's some awesome writing, I'm admiring the square shape highlights! ^^
Wicked design dude!, would be great as a logo or banner. 
I think it'd look better if the L's were larger and infront of the "HE" and "O", as though the arrangement made a corner in the middle of the perspective.
At the top of the right face on the E, the line has two little points where the line looks like it bumps a little bit.