You really ought to post a link to the base maker's site.

http://autumnpixels.com/

Honestly, aside from the hair, it doesn't look like you did a whole lot to make this your own. The dress is skin tight and looks like the shadows all perfectly follow the contours of the original base - no attention has been given to making the fabric look like fabric. There's no variation to the fishnet to make it look like it is following the contours of her leg, rather than just being a pattern pasted over the base...

I'm sorry, but Jaeden's work is the only thing that carries this piece.

Like they said, sexy :D

yum sexy

Fantastic ... er ... pose. I really like this ... because of the pixel art.

5 blue dotettes.

Sexy, but the fishnet is odd.

i do use irfanview.... i am starting to save as png cuz it doesnt mess up like that

yeah i kno when i save it the pixels mess up for some reason

nice work but i dont realy like the fishnets

hey there sexy =P

i think the shading and stuffs look pretty ok, but i really dislike the way the black stuff has been done

and something has messed up your .gif, cuz there's some weird dithey stuff

thank you very much! It took me quite a while...

I think you've got the hooker look right anyway. Good job.