Very cool shading

the muscle shading is divine

Hey you updated! (and you said you want fix suggestions, so here i go...)
To Fix:
-Thumb and little finger of the hand look out of place(little finger seems too big/ thumb should point inwards and must be smaller to support the illusion of it being farer away than the fingers and it should be attached to the hand about one or two pixels higher)
-The belly could have a few more parts and a stronger defined non-flat surface
-The legs... maybe you should completely redo them(suggestion: keep the beginning of the monsters right leg and make the lower part bend behind, so that it kneels on the ground, then put up the upper part of the left leg horizontally and  make the lower part go down at a right angle, so that the whole figure gets a strong stance)

very cool, i like the style.  My only crit is that you're very inconsistent with your shading style, and there are way too many colors apparent in the thighs

Nice but i think the color scheme lets it down a bit because i dont think pink-purple is so good for a monster.

buh pillows.. and a very weird composition anatomy etc

Could have made it better and with less colours.

Deamn! This looks great. I like the colors. It must be aa in this picture :)

Looking cool so far. I especially like the "turtle head". Would be great, if you finish it sometime.

i think the lineart could have been better,and there is pillowshading on his abs. but gawd, i love the colors and the style and the shadows.