Aladdin's Lamp

Aladdin's Lamp

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Aladdin's Lamp



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Title: Aladdin's Lamp
Pixel Artist: Superdry  (Level 1 Rookie :: 201 points)
Posted: 9/18/2012 06:23
Statistics:  5 comments    1 faves    0 avatars

My first non-sprite pixel art image ever!

Please give me suggestions and critique!

 

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clefairykid (Level 9 Federal Agent) @ 11/4/2012 16:48

 I really like the shading and contrast on the lamp but I think the green whisp could be improved, maybe some more highlights or something.


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Superdry (Level 1 Rookie) @ 9/18/2012 23:32

thanks man! 


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Muziak (Level 3 Enforcer) @ 9/18/2012 14:24

this is really sick, I like your style


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Superdry (Level 1 Rookie) @ 9/18/2012 07:55

thank you for your many suggestions and the critique! Ill try to fix it!  :)


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jellybeanfish (Level 4 Button Man) @ 9/18/2012 07:49

 Nice! I really dig the shading on the lamp and the shape of the handle, as well as the greens on the smoke.

However, the spout (?? nozzle? I don't really know what to call it) looks weird when you consider the angle of the rest of the lamp, how the top of the spout is a straight horizontal line like that. Here's some photos in a similar angle to what you were going for:

Here and Here

That last one is from a slightly downward angle, but you get my point - that the spout kind of curves. It wouldn't be completely straight horizontal like that.

The 'wisps' coming off the top of the smoke stuck out to me, too - it looks more like frayed fabric than smoke, though I really like the bottom part of the smoke where it's coming out of the lamp, it has nice form.

Luckily there are a bunch of hella good references to help you out with this.

Alternate suggestion: You could make the smoke be starting to take the forms of a genie or something.

Overall, I like it - and please don't take my critique as an indicator I don't! I'm critiquing BECAUSE I like it, and I think it could be even better with some tweaks. 


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