The character looks like its reading when out of context. But it looks good and I like the colours, specifically the blues.

Well it's a dress not a cloak, i'm new and agree this does not work so well. Thank you for the review, I will continue to work on it.

 When I saw it I was thinking she is just reading a huge book, but after reading description, I think it's not working out so well, she doesn't really look like she's flying, it might be because there's no bg.. Anyway I would make the cloak move more, atm it's just barely moving to left and right at some points

I think you could make the cloak go to right if you control the character to go right, and same for left, but if she's moving forward the cloak could go up and down more

I really like the character though and the idea of her flying on a book, the staff is nicely done also, great concept. :)