Well this I tried to make a suicide scene where a boy kills himself because her girlfriend left her. 

Story:

" I don't want to live anymore", Henry screamed. Tears rolled down his cheek. Lyra, Henry's girlfriend had left her because she started liking someone else. Henry broke down and was so much frustrated that he couldn't control it. He wept continously. His eyes turned red and swell. Henry banged his head against the wall with such a pressure that he started bleeding. "Why? Why, WHY!?!" Henry screamed and slid down the wall with his back against the wall and started crying again. "What was my mistake? Love her?" he thought. A picked up the pistol from the drawer and said ," I can't live without her and put the pistol in  his mouth. He closed his eyes, as he was sure that we was going to suicide yet he was trembling with the fear of death. Beads of tears were rolling down his forehead. He closed his eyes with pressure and screamed.... He gathered the courage and pulled the trigger... and... BOOM! The bullet pierced his head and blood spilled out of the wound. His body lay unconsious... he died....

He killed himself just because the girl he loved left her? He killed himself because of a girl who didn't understand the love her boyfriend had for her?

Was what Henry did correct? Henry should have killed himself or should have lived and try to face the rejection?