And I like the center/far right most. I guess it is just up to personal preference.
I like the furthest one on the left. The face is less menacing without the nose-guard, and the shoulders are nice & rounded. His arms are a little too straight & thick though - try #1 with new arms.
I'm a fan of the second guy on the left.
I think you definitely want a full outline on that hat, as demonstrated by PJ's grey background.
2nd guy to the left <3