Hilarious concept. I love the face and stats part, but I'm not crazy about the sprite, maybe if it was AA'd? There seems to be much more detail ont he BG, items and enemy than on the sprite

The background is making some of the lighter elements a little hard to read. Visually pleasing overall though.

 Thanks, I should've clarified; the intention was for the character to look out of place in context to the colorful setting. I can see how distracting the HUD is now, though.

 I like the mockup but without gothington

i think all the element above on the left are too big and intrusive

very cool mockup!