Colors are good, but proportions are a bit off - eyes are usually midway between chin and the top of the head. So make them lower until the position will look right. Also looks like you made the canvas beforehand and tried to cram resulting image in it - flat hair on top gives it away. If you see that something doesn't want to fit - make the canvas bigger.
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Colors are good, but proportions are a bit off - eyes are usually midway between chin and the top of the head. So make them lower until the position will look right. Also looks like you made the canvas beforehand and tried to cram resulting image in it - flat hair on top gives it away. If you see that something doesn't want to fit - make the canvas bigger.