The inturned knees are ok, but having the feeth turned in even more ontop of that just looks... painful. The feet should be more parallel to the knees.

 lovely! Love the detail of the face, very readable at that size. Pose is cliche I agree, but looks good on her.

The torso is small and her head is just a little too big.

I never really like these poses because these seem to be slapped on nearly every female character. I don't mind it if it fits the character's personality and lifestyle.

Interesting work by the way. 

Personally I think the pose is fine since it gives a higher sense of feminity even if she is meant to be a warrior. Although going on what ultimaodin said about her looking instable I would turn her feet outward just a bit so she doesn't look like she's trembling so much as standing like a girly girl.

Me like the pose :)

I like all but the pose. I honestly don't know why women are always depicted in that poe with their knees pointed in and feet at some awkward uncomfortable angle. It kind of detracts from the idea of her being awarrior as well, since that would be an insanely instable pose.

That aside it's very nice. The cloak covering her right leg (our left) is blended in to much with the shadow so it actually feels less like it is a seperat plane above and part of the pants itself when at regular zoom.