Your high level of detail for the environments, especially the gritty look of the textures, makes this chibi sprite really not fit. It is a great sprite and design, but a bit more realism would go a long ways. The portrait fits the style more, but you need to use more of the lighter skin tones so she doesn't look so grey. The colors are there are ready, the just need to cover larger areas.

Thanks guys for the comments, i will edit the char. Basically the face to get a more realistic look than a cartoon/chibi

The icon's skin looks grey, but I guess that's something to tell DawnBringer. Agreeing with the others that the styles and characters designs are pretty divergent.

I agree with stava about the avatar and sprite not matching up. The avatar looks older/ more mature than the sprite. I think you should emulate a younger look into the portrait.

Very nice work otherwise. I love seeing all these updates. The building looks tons better now :)

Look forward to the other characters and ESPECIALLY to seeing this game actually in motion... 

great one!

 I don't see the avatar and character fitting at all.. The avatar is realistic and the character is really chibi

But you are doing great job with this :P

 I think the character really fits into the style of the mockup, it also suits the avatar, although I feel it could use a little more detail in the face. Even if you don't rework (a bit) it I think it fit's in really well 

Love the style you chose for the character sprite. I'd be completely okay with you using it for all of 'em. 

 Fits and looks pretty cute I'd say