Dapper Slime

Dapper Slime

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Dapper Slime



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Title: Dapper Slime
Pixel Artist: RileyFiery  (Level 9 Federal Agent :: 19057 points)
Posted: 2/9/2013 01:47
Palette: 10 colors
Statistics:  8 comments    6 faves    0 avatars

Got the idea from a previous gallery piece (the sprite next to him) I submitted. I wanted to attempt a portrait for it. Dapper slimes are quite the dangerous gents. If you're not careful, they might attack you with compliments and make for one riveting good show.

I'm trying to practice as much as possible. Feel free to rip me a new one with comments and criticism. I greatly appreciate all of them.

Edit: with the critique from showtime, I added some AA to the underside of the eyebrows and lessened the AA on the hat. I also added a sprite that matches more with the portrait. Old Version

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RileyFiery (Level 9 Federal Agent) @ 2/12/2013 04:29

Yeah, I see what you mean. I'm having a very hard time fixing it, but still, I gave it a shot nonetheless. Feels slightly less rough to me now. I extended the bottom AA out a tad more and added one of the green colors to buffer between the lightest grey and white band.

Still feels slightly odd though.


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showtime (Level 6 Made) @ 2/10/2013 08:52

Looking better!  I think the white band looks slightly misshapen now though.


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RileyFiery (Level 9 Federal Agent) @ 2/9/2013 21:46

Thank you so very much for the critique. I really appreciate it. Almost all of the colors are from DB's infamous palette, so all props to him. I'm still learning how to use AA properly and where to place it, but sometimes I go overboard or I use too little. I really have a rough time with it. The hat's white band is a great example of where I have no idea on how to apply it. Any who, I still gave it a shot on trying to correct it as well as the lack of AA on the underside of the eyebrows. I wasn't very sure on what to put between the red and light green on the blush to smooth it out. Most colors I tried fell flat, so I went with the gray which looked okay zoomed out.

@crozier, I still believe there's always room for improvement, especially in my case. I'm certainly going to keep on practicing, hopefully getting better! I love pixel pushing.


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showtime (Level 6 Made) @ 2/9/2013 17:26

Cool idea.  I'd say maybe there's too much AA around the hat, and too little in other areas (ie, undersides of the eyebrows)

Colours are very pleasant.  Blue/gray AA between his blushing cheeks and the rest of his face might be a bit out of place, too.  Not very noticeable to me unless I am zoomed in though.


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crozier (Level 6 Hitman) @ 2/9/2013 16:51

 No worries! It is already good! 

But that doesn't mean you shouldn't continue practicing :D 


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RileyFiery (Level 9 Federal Agent) @ 2/9/2013 11:00

Now if only I could execute it better. I just have to keep on practicing and hopefully I'll get better.

Thanks for the comments guys.


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skittle (Level 9 Nidan) @ 2/9/2013 08:41

 This idea is superb!


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lfdf (Level 5 Assistant Manager) @ 2/9/2013 06:33

 Cool!


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