There are strokes that look thicker in some parts like in the hair and the yellow coat. And the border line in the hand is too dark. Also pay attention to the light source in order to add shadows in a better way.
ADrawingMan//Yeah, I wanted to, but failed. :(
I think if you added AA it would make it look superb.
There are strokes that look thicker in some parts like in the hair and the yellow coat.
And the border line in the hand is too dark. Also pay attention to the light source in order to add shadows in a better way.