Dam the saturation really did bring it out. If she placed that in before the contest closed it would have been one of the best entries get job Time Piece :D
You have an excellent point about the saturation, I may revamp the colors right before the contest ends. Thank you :)
Ooh, very nice. But I think if you were to up the saturation just a little bit (and perhaps make the 2 pixel thick outline a little less thick) this would be really good.
Spending 30 second upping the saturation can help, like so:
http://img844.imageshack.us/img844/2069/quickedit.png
Looks really good, nice work ^^