An interesting blend of industrial and surreal.

Never encountered your profile before.  So many goodies.  Really like your avatar also xD  So simple but such a great feeling it gives.

Great idea, great work

Gorgous.

This work is very favorite.
I like the color contrast.

 finally something good 

this is beautiful!

 Looks so good, dude. Great idea and good job. Beautiful clouds

Definitely going to vote for this one~

The title should be changed to Jeremy Show

Truman show in a way. Nice scenario.

D7 D7 .. Nice Work!

I like that it isn't overly complicated, it gets the point across. Good stuff.

Crit - read if you want to

I think this could have been really good! It's already promising. What makes it feel out of place is that the opening is very saturated compared to the rest of the image. It stands out too much. If you'd pick colors a bit closer to the general tone of the image, it'd feel more cohesive. Also, by rearangeing the image a bit, so that the eye travles towards the door would be helpful too. Right now you have this slanted thing going on, which leads the eye out of the page. And then the door, which is vibrant, forces you too look at it, but your eye kind of wants to travle off the page because of the slant.

So if you'd place the buildings and clouds in a way so that it flows towards the door, it'd feel nicer.

Here's a very crude paintover, but hopefully you sort of get the gist of what I mean: http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/5580/crit2.png

Despite of your own criticisme on this work, I really like it. Not every pixel-piece has to be outstanding and incredibly well made. I like this piece for what it is. 5/6

Probably a poor choice of words. "Unpolished" might be better; there's nothing worse than people who put down their own stuff  to fish for compliments or make criticism feel less valid :p

Thanks!

 Looks great, man.

Don't nock yer art dude, this looks great!