The first step :)

The first step :)

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The first step :)



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Title: The first step :)
Pixel Artist: Bartass  (Level 1 Rookie :: 140 points)
Posted: 3/3/2013 07:55
Statistics:  3 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

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42and19 (Level 1 Intern) @ 3/5/2013 05:04

 This is really rather good and I hope you continue working on it. I wanted to expand on Antiboton's comment. The spacing of all your letters appears off. The P and the I look squished together, the X appears closer to the I than the E and the L looks lonely way out there.Also, the ballon looks deflated, by an amount that would prohibit floating. I love everything else about it. You color choice is excellent and unique. Along with the cartoonlike style. I would love to see more of this type of art from you. 


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Bartass (Level 1 Rookie) @ 3/4/2013 22:19

 You are right. I try to change it :)


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Antiboton (Level 8 Odds and Ends) @ 3/3/2013 13:54

I like the label and the dithering at the top part.

The balloon shape doesn't look so real and the letter "X" seems mmm displaced...


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