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The misspelling is strong with this one. It makes me cringe a little inside. But the pixel art itself is pretty good and making a comic strip was a nice idea.
English is not my native language and even I know almost every line of this comic is wrong. "I finished..." "What does this glove do?" "... defend our city from villains!!" Also it has the banding issue and some jaggies on the doctor.
It's good to know that you like my work.
Thanks CraftyPixel & Ashkin for your feedback.
HCGamer, I know it means "conquer", I wanted to give a little humor to this work.
Haha! I just read it, and I think the text is hilarious. It should stay that way.
I think you need someone who knows english to correct just about every line of this thing... in the last panel, the character says he wants to conquer women. Do you know what conquer means...?
Banding corrected of my pixel art!!
Thanks you ultimaodin!!
So much banding. The concept is neat but the banding definitely needs fixing.
Really funny thank you for this