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Already corrected!
Thank you very much for your advice.
flowso don´t worry, also my English is a bit poor.
About your style anime, you can see many references here to study:
spriters-resource.com/pc_computer/kenseishoujo/index.html
you really need to work on the shading (you are just pillow shading) and work some textures as well
I think the AA on this piece is a bit over the top, looks like they have some kind of aura. The light source is a bit hard to track too, they kind of have there own flashlights they cast underneath them. You could try to add more texture on the armor, cloths and stone pillars to make it look more ancient old style. Picture looks a bit flat too with stone pillars in the background.
As for that I like the guys facial expressions, they look really intimidating. Shadowing the eyes makes it really cool. The body language is great too, they are like "One step more and we gonna beat you" kind of feel.
Is great that you want to do more AA-ing like the other 2 pieces you did earlier. I myself hate AA-ing (typical anime style as they drop it and only do the line work or is just me?)
Anyway just make sure the AA-ing is invisible and not too visible.
Oh also zues looks likes his crying
(sorry for bad english as well)