I like the characters and the colors and the script, but the composition is pretty empty on the left. the clouds are pretty clunky too. Having a very minimal use of a few bright colors (chest, eyes, etc) could also add some focus.

 beautiful in so many ways.

 It's pretty cool that i noticed your style the second i saw this thumbnail with your other recent upload. Your palettes really fit with the theme of your game (from what i've seen so far, and judging by your screen name).

 everything you make is amazing. NEVER STOP

Wow, this is awesome! (if not a bit creepy) But honestly, I could probably say the same of all your pieces. I really like the gloomy/mysterious style you've got going.

 I'm gonna go ahead and assume that this is gonna be a game... PLEASE MAKE THIS A GAME!