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Really cool. I especially like the motion of the arrow in flight.
I can see that, I might mess with the beginning of her draw back anywho so I'll try tweaking that.
Very much agree on the straw, I might give a whirl at changing that. Thanks for your thoughts!
To be more precise, I'd say that the outline of the tiles on the top-left corner is too dark and it doesn't blend in the palish surrounding. As for the straw, I think it lacks texture, which makes it appear really flat. (The rest of this house on the right lacks depth on an overall level, in my opinion)
But, I repeat myself, I really like your piece !
I really like this clean pixelling and the calmess that this piece evokes through your color choice. What I like less though are the grey tiles at the top left corner and the roof of straws on the right side. It does't really fit with the rest of the piece.
The animation is really smooth, but I feel as if there needs to be more of a tautness when she draws the bow string back. Still, nice pixels and animation.
This is great.