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Double outline = banding + noise.
If you want to make a glow, make it wider and fade it progressively into the bg.
Important areas lack readability: face/eyes, hands.
The shading on the clothing and the cloud is suggesting it's pillow shaded, but the hair and arms aren't.
Ill fix the jaggies and mess with the clouds, but how does this look pillow shaded? That I'm not seeing
There are lots of jaggies in here, and this looks very pillow shaded. The texture on the couds is also very strange.
Outline was mainly for it not to blend into the background, although I'll probably end up taking out the background. Lemme go back and fix up the face and the hands
EDIT:
Attempted to fix, result is as posted