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I rated all remaining 136 pics only to get level 2 and vote Yes for your artwork.
1)Moon has a good texture, but it is not round (maybe it is intentional).
2)Clouds look better now, but you can make them more realistic by applying proper light on them. Look.
3)The person drops no shadow (is he a vampire?)
4) Dithering on the sky is not a friend - if you have no reason for color-count restrictions - you'd better add another color or two to make sky look better + slight shine around stars. You did a right thing by removing blue line on the sky.
4)
Clouds, trees and moustache need more work - they look too sketchy.
Don't know why, but I really like it.
If only you spent some more time to polish it...
Ok makei, and looked well and see Manupix comment referred.
Edit: Clouds are not as dark and are not under 
That attitude won't get you anywhere, especially not forward. Manupix knows what he's talking about and any critique should be listened to regardless.
@mANUPIX: I like it as it is. Anything else? thanks for ur comment. ;-)
There's a huge contrast issue with this piece: the darkest parts of the foreground are medium grey, while the clouds are much darker.
Clouds can't be behind the moon! Also moonlit clouds are bright, not dark.
The moon itself looks a dull grey instead of bright. It's the light source, 'moonshine': should be the brightest part of the piece.
congrats!