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this has lots of banding, you should fix that, also I don't really get what's going on in here, I assume those are 4 guys. But, are they on the top of a mountain? Or is that a castle? The text is messed un too, unalligned, and IMO I don't think that having "earth" off the list helps.
It's supposed to be ragged and banded. I was hoping to make it that way and also, they're just the background. The sages aren't exactly supposed to be explained they're just there. The lists are just there for concept, I can take them off if it makes you feel better :)