Nice style.

Much better.. It has a nice sepration now.. Good Job.

I tried what u said and i think it looks alot better

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I would break them up make them larger, and add in a few smaller ones..  Try that..

I was going for some styled mountains

I agree it still looks like sand is falling on him.. I would go for simple strokes, and reduce the number of them if you are looking for rocks..?

Fixed it.

Looks Better?

Background makes it look like there's a sand cave-in happening on him, dunno if it's intentional but a way that it could be avoided is to make some of the strokes go all the way down behind objects or him.

Looks good, reminds me a little of what I have been doing with my game..