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Title: island
Pixel Artist: fbit  (Level 1 Gangster :: 24 points)
Posted: 7/6/2013 21:43
Statistics:  5 comments    0 faves    0 avatars

I would like to add more clouds to this, and maybe add some darker colors, but I would like to hear some healthy critique of this work in it's current state. I've been studying color a lot recently, and I think I will continue with this palette in a few more pieces. I'm glad that I decided to starting using my account, because I have found a lot of motivation from all of the artists that are on here!! I hope my pieces will improve and properly reflect my efforts and intentions. Any recommendations and comments are welcome!
(Edit: Fixed the white lines and added darker lines around the base of the tree. I also removed the animation((which I might re-add later)). Looks better, already.)

Small, colored(non-animated) version here: http://i41.tinypic.com/a1k8j7.jpg

 

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ParkerBabyDiaperCompany (Level 2 King Checker) @ 7/8/2013 07:28

I like this a lot.


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Inject (Level 5 Captain) @ 7/7/2013 07:23

I don't really understand the balloons? Or are those supposed to be the clouds. One is blinking like an SOS signal and one appears to be cut off. The animation is also very chopping.


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r1k (Level 1 Rookie) @ 7/7/2013 00:34

looks like you saved it as a jpeg at some point.  It adds a lot of artifacts and might be the reason the white outline is there.  I dont think this will get into the gallery untill you can fix this.

I would go for a darker outline on the tree trunk because as it is, the trunk gets a little lost and doesnt look as solid as it should.


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fbit (Level 1 Gangster) @ 7/6/2013 22:28

Got it! Thanks for the advice


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jeremy (Level 11 Sphinx) @ 7/6/2013 22:19

Please change the detail file to 1x zoom. The upscaling doesn't add anything, and PJers like to zoom in by themselves.


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