The melon is so crisp and clear O_O

Hey man! Really good pixeling as always! I agree with the previous feedback, especially about the shadows. Would've been awesome with a sunset in the background and a small secondary light source from the front left/right and some cool shadows :) Anyway, a great idea and really good rendering! peace!

Oh thanks.

I was distracted by drawing all those small things and I didn't notice that overall the piece looks just boring and bad.

This is not the first time. The next time I will not start drawing until I have good-looking sketch or a clear imagination of how it will look.

Great, but too much detail, and too evenly spread. This makes it look busy at 1x, all gets clearer at 2x.

Eyes love resting places with little or nothing happening. The shadows at bottom left could have been left murky, both melon and cloth. Same for the innards: they look like a plate from an anatomy atlas, with nothing left to the imagination, and therefore not as scary as could be ;)

I like the leaf and the antialiasing of the stripes on the side of the melon. Nice job!

WoW best work!

 Damn dude! This is some great pixeling. The cloth is really well done. I didnt enjoy the clouds though. They don't seem too good compared to the rest of this.