As I said, I don't mind.
If Kurieta feels like he has learned something, then sure, why not let it be in the gallery.
So I guess I'll leave it up to Kurieta.
Its perfectly fine to learn from other people's edits so you can learn. If you only copy waht the edit shows then you didn't really 'pixel it' ya noes? Anyhow if Night feels your update does not cheat of his edit then all is cool.
This is the reason some people don't like to make edits of other's work. There is a lot of risk that the person will not learn. Again, Its no big deal as this is the first time and you'll never do this again ;)
Also, if Night approves then instead of deleting and resubmitting I'll remove all the comments regarding this issue before adding to the gallery, k.
Made a few edits, but didn't change it too drastically I'm afraid... You made this a million times better and for that I thank you.
I apologize T.T I didn't really think there was anything to change and I was really looking forward to uploading this 
I'll edit this a lot and then reupload it, is that fine? Sorry again 
@Kurieta, you never want to do that if you used Night's edit, k.. The whole point is to learn and develop skills not to copy. A misunderstanding is ok and no big deal done once, k.
Err...
Isn't very nice taking an edit picture I created for you, and put it here as your own work.
I didn't create it as something for you to post here, but as an example to the points I made in my critique.
Nevertheless, I couldn't care less, either this is a misunderstanding of what I said, or you're just cheating yourself.
Yeaah, its beautiful bro 
@jalonso is right, try AA in the next pixel art :D
Good work on completing your sprite! I look forward to your improvements in the future.
You did an excellent job here and your pixelling and coloring is getting much better.
In future works do try to be cleaner with your lines and when lines are extra wonky start making some attempts at AA, k.
good work dude