I really like the look of this character (looks like a fun hero to play as) so I did a slight edit.
http://imgur.com/o5olEII
At this size readability is very important and often adding too many details can just be read as noise. It's not necessary to change things so dramatically as I did, but just some clean-up would help.
Ow, thanks! I see what you mean =) very helpful indeed! That's why I posted it at 200%, couldn't read it at such a small scale^^