Althrough I second PBDC character critique considering this is a game mockup where he should be readable in front of both dark and light backgrounds.
Thanks, indeed the portait didnt rly fit , I changed it.
Superb! Is the sprite meant to fit the charcater portrait? If so I'd probably go a brighter colour up for his face.The right side of the hearts could also use being the same as the left because they blend in as is in comparison. That house is brilliant.
For a game boy game rather dark and moody graphics! I like it very much.
I like it though maybe there could be more of the lightest color in the character to make him stand out.
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